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[leaders light]

Please upload the full animation when it's finished.
Don't spam NG with a 6 second clip please.

It does look pretty cool and I understand that you're eager to show the world what you're capable of, but please .. upload work that is finished.

spzltr748 responds:

yeah i realize ..sorry i was being too eager to show everyone ..its because im improving fast! so my apologies! im working on a the full version everything will be edited i'll add more effects to make it look legit and maybe mix my styles in animation because im currently studying a book that helps thank you for the response!

[Tuber's Brawl]

Youtubers?! We don't want your kind around here.
Lol jk.

Pretty damn epic, even though I don't know half of those people.
Great use of the music. I like that you synced the hits up with the music.

Little criticism: I felt that the little orange "hit" fx might be a bit too static and not give that much impact, because it's just the same graphic reused. Right now it looks like it's going "wooooosh..." instead of "WAM".

You have to lower your audio a bit so it doesn't clip (crackle and distort) or maybe that's just the song that you used.

Also, the titles and fonts looked a bit amateurish, I know it's not that big of a deal, but it will make the whole animation just look that little bit more polished.

Hatena360 responds:

Aye, thanks! I always appreciate criticism ^-^ I'll keep all that in mind. Thanks!

[Cakewalk]

Hello fellow HKU-student

I liked this animation a lot. Looks very polished and professional. Although a minor critique ( and maybe it's my personal preference) the animation looked a bit too "pose-to-pose" without much consideration for the weight of the characters (I mean, specifically on the animation of the old woman, who looks like she's able to walk without much trouble)
And some poses also looked a bit strange, like the one at 0:47.

(btw: welke studierichting volg je?)

Sijbren responds:

Geslaagd voor 2d animatie nu

[Justin Bieber gets shot]

Nice!

<3 OMG JUSTIN BIEBER! WHY DID YOU KILL HIM OMG OMG ;_;

Anyways,
Nice work, but the animation could be better,
Maybe, a higher framerate and use more frames to make it smoother.
The audio could be in higher quality (I know, that song is fucking gay, but it will make your Flash look/sound better) I barely hear what he said.
The idea was fun =]
The blood looked very detailed,
Keep it up!

~2DPolygon

madwalrus responds:

Ok cool, thanks for the tips :)

[Race Around The World]

nice!

This is really good for a 10 year old! But it's not finished, I wanna see more!

Yusuf responds:

sorry, don't think i'll ever finish this :P

[Narrator's 2nd Love Story]

not

not bad

PostTimeskipSam responds:

This is the pinnacle of review writing!
Thanks for the review :D